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Why?

What I want to say here is "I really don't like this submission because it is pointless and I don't even find it amusing" but I'm not going to say that because we, as NewGrounds users, are supposed to write reviews; not give personal comments.

I agree with what a few other people have said. The characters voices cannot be made out therefore we do not know what they are saying, ergo this flash submission loses all meaning and substance. It would not be hard to open the file and just boost the talking so it is louder or the music so it is quieter.

Did that flash have anything to do with the title "BotBrigade TimeTrials #1" because I saw the number 5 at the start and thought, "Ok it has a countdown", and then the number just went away. Does this flash have a meaning at all? Is it supposed to entertain because I do not feel entertained?

It took you three years? I'll assume that you spent about a month on it in those three years, and that you spent the other 25 months doing other things because that was not three years work.

Oh and that flashing background in the second scene: OW! I could be on the floor having a seizure right now. If you are going to have things like that you HAVE TO PUT A WARNING IN. Try thinking about the people viewing the flash and not just yourself.

One good thing though, it was short so it didn't waste too much of my time.

If you don't like this review then either fix the flash or take it down because I'm sure you'll just get more of these reviews.

botbrigade responds:

asdf

dont be so acusing.

If anything this review is a lot like calling me gay, for example, just in a more in between the lines kind of thing.

Your striking above middle field

It was short but it was to the point. Which is great, because who really wants to watch a 5 minute long animation if it could be explained in 2 minutes.

Someone else wrote a review saying "The graphics were pretty good! ...and the animation was awesome." I agree. Your graphics are pretty good, they are not the best but we can't expect that from everyone.

I had a bigger problem though. To me the animation style seems to be inconsistent. For example the phone looks different from the man who looks different from the background which looks different to the rockets.

If you ever plan on re-doing this animation I would suggest some updated assets and a starting and ending frame. Loops are good but this is clearly not a loop, so it should have a loading screen with a play button and a closing screen with a "watch again?" button.

Dew responds:

Ah cool.

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