ThePVAGlue's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[WHOOKOS Beta: Epis 1]

Very Awesome

Well that was awesome, nice animation and art work. Except for those grey extras walking through the school, ugh that made me gag. It had an entertaining storyline. The only things that really stop me from giving a higher score are those god-awful subtitles (they just looked unpleasant and distracting with their bright colours. and also there was no option to turn them off) and the boring, boring, boring, boring, boring, boring replay screen. Looking forward to the next episode and giving you a better score.

[Minor Distractions]

Very Informative

Shall need duck tape the next time my brother starts telling me about his latest game no matter what it is I'm doing. Secondly isn't much easier with a drawing pad? Thirdly WOO FALL OUT BOY!!!!

[The Future Wasn't There]

Very good story!!

I only gave you a 8 because it wasn't anything outstandingly original or unpredictable. I read some of the other people's comments and I find them mostly annoying. I write stories so I could see where you were going with this from the scene right after he had the dream, and it's a beautiful morale. But it seems everyone else is only looking for action so they don't even think about what they're seeing and assume that it explodes, and then they're all confused and vote badly. Am I right, that is what most of you are thinking? It doesn't blow up, this is something serious and if you want explosions you clearly shouldn't be watching this

[Don't Ignore the Signs]

Excellent

Well I thought that it got the message through quite clearly. The man smokes and he takes 5 more steps, falls over and stops moving, most certainly dead. I believe this animation was a big exaggeration about the effects of smoking because he smokes one cigarette and dies a few seconds later. Your message got put through clearly to me at least! And how much do you want to bet that the people who say they don't think the message is clear are smokers or know smokers.

You should go with Cynic-san's idea (just below mine) and do your next animation on "Put Down the Big Mac" I think that would be a great follow up to this animation!

10/10 because the animation was good, the artwork was excellent and the message got through clearly.

[Abnormality Episode -1-]

Awesomeness

Almost totally worth a 10. Grerat work the lot of you! The only thing I really would think would help is a hover stage on your buttons! People always forget them and I think that ruins it. Furthermore WOO AUSSIES!!!

Looking forward to giving you a 10 on the next episode!

[There She Is!! final step]

NOOOOOOOOOOO

I don't want it to be over!

These animations you have made are truly historical! They should never be forgotten.

[The Legend of David 4]

I loled

This is great, I love it. One thing though: you really, really need to work on your grammar because the subtitles are just shocking! Punctuation missing or wrong, capital letters where they shouldn't be and not where they should be. I'm not sure if I should write a review on someone's grammar but I do think an 18 year old would know "you're" isn't spelt with a capital. Great (Hopefully one day perfect) work!

[-Asylum-]

Pretty darn good but there's always room right?

I have to admit that I don't think it needs a massively descriptive background story. The mystery in just watching a story unfold that one knows nothing about is a perfect story. Mystery is a good dramatic tension.

Things to work on though (As this is a review):

1- The initial loading bar needs to be a little more obvious. I was sitting at my screen wondering if it was done because it wasn't saying "Ready" or "Play" anywhere. If a viewer is confused about something as simple as that it needs fixing.

2- Seriously dude THE FLASHING! If you're not going to re-do this animation and take out some of or lesson the strength of the flashes at least put a warning in your comments or before it starts because there could be people on the floor having an epileptic seizure. You really have to think about what people could be watching this not just you.

Ok that's all form me